短文改错是中考题型之一,它考查同学们的阅读理解能力和在阅读中识别错误的能力,出现的错误主要有拼写、习惯用法、词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面,难度较大。解此类题应注意:速度全文,了解大意;运用语法,分析句子;复读全文,查缺补漏。这次帅气的小编为您整理了初中英语作文改错优秀5篇,如果对您有一些参考与帮助,请分享给最好的朋友。
改错道理是
有一会,我考试不
接下来的一次考试我便成功了。
一年级:李强
还记得我读三年级的时候,是一个星期三,宋老师给我们布置了一项家庭作业,就是每人写一篇日记。我心想:糟了!我这几天没发生过什么新鲜事儿,我怎么写得出来呀!算了,还是先回家。
回到家,把书包一扔,便苦思起来,该写什么好呢?突然,我灵机一动,便拿出几本作文书,翻了翻,便看见其中一本作文书里有一篇名叫《家庭游戏》的文章,我觉得这篇文章不错,但是里面的人物是爸爸和妈妈,可是我的爸爸、妈妈都不在家呀!就改成哥哥和姑妈吧!
我这样一边想一边抄起作文来。
第二天早上,我的心里很沉重,因为我的那篇文章是抄的。忽然,交作业了,我心时更紧张了,如果宋老师发现是抄的,那我该怎么办呢?过了一会儿,我还是忐忑不安地把日记本交了上去。
下午放学的时候,我走在梯楼间,宋老师从我身旁走过,又倒转来说:“你过来一下。”我心想:肯定是宋老师发现了。在路上,宋老师问我:“你的那篇文章是不是抄的?若不是你抄的,还是写得不错。”我脸红了,吞吞吐吐地说:“这是我抄的。”
宋老师说:“好文章里的词句可以摘抄,但是你不能摘抄文章。我连忙回答说:“行。”
宋老师这么一批评我,我倒还安下心来。
山东省滨州市 博兴县博奥小学 三年级一班 李嘉豪
今天下午,妈妈走了,我偷偷的在家里玩游戏,玩了15分钟以后,我又上了广网,看了看动画片,还有看小小,然后,在广网的旁边,一个方框里,摁了gef,就出来了三百个动画,我就看了一下,有一个动画之中,还有孙悟空大闹天宫的事情呢,他西天取经,用了20年才取到了真经,我还玩了许多小游戏,有过关铲将......还有许多种呢。
最后的时候,妈妈来了,我就关死了微机,妈妈发现了之后,训了我一顿,让我改错,我就哭了。妈妈还让我把字改的全班第一,以后不能偷偷在家里玩游戏,在学校里的时候,表现得好一点。
妈妈还讲我小时候的故事,刚开始没有衣裳呢,她还说,我爸爸身上的。小虫子跟我妈妈身上的小虫子合在一起才有了我,是爸爸妈妈给我的生命,妈妈还说:“如果你不是我孩子的话,我才不给你那么多改错误的机会呢!”,所以我要改错,我就去写字的了。
写完字之后,我就想再改什么错呢,只要改的错误我都改了,妈妈还让我写一篇日记,发生在今天的事情,我想了几分钟后,就想完了,我想得一清二楚,我就开始打字了,我一边说着,妈妈一边给我打着,我也一边想:一定要把错误改过来。
我又想起原来贾老师说过:“别人让你做你只能做好一次,你自己想做能做好一辈子呢”,所以我要把错误全改过来,要坚持一辈子,以后再也别犯同样的错误。
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11 must-can
12 which-that.
13 drop “he”
14 anybody-somebody
15 anywhere
16.a-an
17 neither-either
18 quick-quickly
19 drop “that”
20 tell-telling
习题(三)
21. She asked me if I had found out my new pen.
22. He had changed so much that I could hardly know him.
23. I learnt of from Joan that Mary had fallen ill.
24. I didn’t hear you. Please repeat the sentence again.,
25. Would you please speak something about your family?
26. We must study hard in order to serve for the people better in the future.
27. I know little about Tom, but I know Mary better than he.
28. The writing of the report spent me two evenings.
29. If I had time, I shall see the new film.
30. Don’t let the children who are so young to go swimming.
My dream neighborhood is in the center of city. It's a great place to live. Because if offers us a convenient life which everybody dreams of. It's a very busy and clean area. There are lots of cars on Center Street, especially in the morning and evening. Because most people travel at those two time periods. And there also is a tube station named Center Street Tube Station near my house which is a really convenient transportation for the neighbourhood. In addition, there is a big supermarket near my house where I can buy almost everthing I need in my daily life. Besides, some restaurants are located by my house,in which I can eat different types of food anytime I want. Morevoer, there is a service centre, where you can post letters, withdraw money, etc. Next to the cetre is a gym and there is a swimming poor inside it. I can work out in my spare time. It's a really great neighborhood. If you want to go and visit it, the best choice is taking a tube to Center Street Tube Station and then my house will be on your right hand side.
Welcome to my dream neighbourhood.。