写作能力是人的语言表达能力的重要组成部分,所以,在汉语教学过程中,对于学生写作能力的培养十分重要。以下是人见人爱的小编分享的初中英语作文(精彩10篇),您的肯定与分享是对小编最大的鼓励。
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man with his grandson of about ten get on the bus. The old man carried his grandson ’s schoolbag and a small violin. I looked around, the bus has no seats. So I gave my seat to the old man at once. But his grandson sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After that, the kid said loudly to his grandpa for water. When he saw the bottle was empty, he was very angry and dropped the empty bottle on the floor. I thought the kid was very impolite and rude. So I believed children should take care of and respect the old and keep the environment clean.
卷面分(5分):
书写仔细认真,单词拼写准确,大小写、标点符号运用规范,卷面干净,整齐。(根据情况教师给予卷面分1-5分)。
作文分(15分):
第一档:(12-15分)
完全符合题目要求,完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点,准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。语言通顺,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。全文结构紧凑,有效地使用了语句间的连接成份,符合英语交际习惯,允许有个别语言错误。
第二档:(8-11分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构,适当运用了语句间的连接成份,较好地达到了交际的目的。。语言基本通顺,有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。
第三档:(4-7分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务,未能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯,影响对写作内容的理解。
第四档:(0-3分)
未完成试题规定的任务,漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多,内容不连贯,无法传达有效信息。
New Year in china is an important festival. Nearly everyone thinks highly of it. No matter where people go and no matter how far they go, they will try their best to go home enjoying family time. And no matter what difficulty or trouble they are experiencing, they will put aside for the period of time. In every house, the main atmosphere is happiness. What do people usually do during the New Year time? They will prepare a big meal together on New Year’s Eve. In the following days, they will visit their relatives. And their relatives also will pay a return visit. One of the most important things that they will not forget to do is to worship their ancestors. This is Chinese New Year.
在中国新年是一个很重要的节日。几乎每个人都很重视。不管人们在哪里,也不管他们去得有多远,他们都会尽量回家团聚。无论他们正在经历着什么样的困难或麻烦,他们都会暂时性的放下。每家每户的主要氛围都是幸福。在新年期间,人们通常都做些什么呢?他们会在除夕的晚上准备一顿大餐。在接下来的几天里,他们就会去拜访亲戚。他们的亲戚也会回访他们。有一件他们不会忘记的重要事情是祭祀祖先。这就是中国的新年。
There is a new library in our school. It is a white tall building. It’s atthe back of our school. There are a lot of green trees around it. It looksbeautiful.
There are five reading rooms in the library. One room is for the teachers,and the other four are for the students. We can read newspapers and booksthere.
After school, I often go to the library to read. Only on Monday, we canborrow or return books there. Books are our good friends. We love books becausethey are very interesting. We love our school library.
I went for a pleasant outing on Saturday with some friends from school.
Wewent to a lovely lake about a hundred kilometres north of here. We left by busat seven o'clock in the morning and arrived at the lake at eight thirty. Wespent the morning swimming and rowing small boats. Then we had lunch in a smallrestaurant by the lake.
After lunch we climbed a large hill behind the lake andenjoyed the beautiful view from the top. We got back to the bus at around fouro'clock and then we came back to town. We had a wonderful time.
A Pleasant Memory of My Childhood I am already 18 years old, but the memory of my childhood is still like an unforgettable sweet dream. One day, all my family went to climb a mountain. There father told my elder sister and me that the first one to get to the top of the mountain would be given a toy. Hearing this, we began to run up. At first I kept ahead, but a few minutes later my sister was ahead of me. However, I didn't give up. That toy attracted me to run forward, In the end I reached the top first. On the top we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and had a picomic. At dusk, we went down the mountain happily. I was the happiest one, because I not only got a toy train but also knew that one shouldn't give up readily.。
课堂上,我对学生不愿积极发言一直不满意。举手的也就那么几个常客,大多数的学生就是不愿举手,我常纳闷为什么自己的“精心设计”却引不起学生的积极反应?
我也常寻找对策,我极力做学生思想工作,我把是否积极发言作为学生的平时评价内容之一……,但是我还是不满意。直到有一天,在一节英语课上我突然找到了一种感觉。
[描述1]:《牛津初中英语》9b Unit 2语法部分,有一段内容为学生参观博物馆,一位学生指着老虎和蛇说:what dangerous animals! 导游说:but the most dangerous animal is the mosquito. 我顺势一引,“do you also think the mosquito is the most dangerous animal?”,有同学说”yes”, 也有同学说”no”, 我马上又问,”what do you think is the most dangerous animal ?”,起先学生的回答都很合乎逻辑,如“老虎”、“狮子”、“狼”、“熊”等,接着有个学生说,“i think the most dangerous animal is the dog because it can bite me. ”,我听后,大笑,学生们也笑了,但是我还是接纳了他的观点。其他同学大概受到了影响,马上有人接着说是“苍蝇”、“蛇”。接着好象学生们的思路一下子打开似的,不断的有人举手,答案也很精彩,有说是“鲨鱼”、有说是“鳄鱼”等,要知道这些单词书本上是没有正式学过的。然而还有同学手举得高高的,想回答……,我突然有一种感觉:今天发言的气氛真是好!
在接下来的几天时间里,我不断的有着这样的惊喜和收获。
[描述2]:《牛津初中英语》9b Unit 2主要是关于动物,在一节课上,我提出一个问题,”what animal do you like best?”,学生或独立思考,或两人讨论后发言了,答案都不错,也都有理由:
i like pandas best because they’re lovely.
i like monkeys best because they’re clever.
i like cats best because i have a cat in my home.
……
好些同学都作了回答,答案也都很个性化,我已经有点满意了。但这时我发现有一个女同学想说又不想说的样子,我马上请她回答,她说:i like octopus(章鱼)best because my name is zhang yu(张瑜).我听了几乎要叫绝起来,我佩服她回答问题的独辟蹊径。内容来自 斐 斐课 件园
[描述3]:《牛津初中英语》9b Unit 2的复习课,我想让学生把整个单元中所涉及到的”amazing things ”都串起来,于是我提问,”what amazing things do you know? ”,我担心学生前面学过的都忘记了,说不出什么。可学生非常的踊跃,有的说到了书上提到的内容,如蛇用耳朵听、有种青蛙是有毒的、大象用趾尖走路、长颈鹿的脖子和人一样有七根骨头等等。在一些学生的带动下,大家纷纷举起了手,他们把前面学过的知识都搬了过来。除了这些之外,他们还讲到了许多课外的知识,如最大的动物是蓝鲸,马是站着睡觉的等等,许多知识我也不清楚,只得虚心聆听。学生已经说出许多后,可还有人举手。后来我只好打住了。
[反思]:教学是教师教学生学的过程,还是师生交往、积极互动、共同发展的过程?传统教学中,教师是课堂的主宰者,课堂上教学关系成为:教师讲,学生听;教师问,学生答,教师写,学生抄。要想把这种“单边活动”转为师生的“双边活动”,则必须要有学生的参与。新课程强调,教学是教与学的交往、互动,师生双方相互交流、相互沟通、相互启发、相互补充,在这个过程中教师与学生分享彼此的思考、经验和知识,交流彼此的情感、体验和观念,从而达到共识、共享和共进,实现教
学相长和共同发展。所以教学中,我们要引导学生积极、主动地参与进来,让他们陈述自己的见解,让我们更多的聆听到他们的声音。那么如何才会听到学生美丽的声音?
一、问题要有开放性。
课堂教学中,泛滥成灾的是“封闭性问题”。封闭性问题是需要的,它强调知识的记忆和理解,打好英语基础需要扎实的语言训练。但这类问题答案相对单一,缺乏更多的信息交流,学生积极性不高。教学中若长期只有封闭性问题,将会严重阻碍和束缚学生的思维能力。
开放性问题是相对于封闭性问题而言的。开放性问题不求答案唯一,而求答案丰富多彩,“开”即能拓展,“放”就会有个性,我们就能听到学生个性化的声音。开放性问题联系学生的主观见解、实际经历、生活体验,使英语教学从“以知识为本”向“以人为本”转变,从“只见教材不见人”向“心中有本,目中有人”转变,增强学生的体验和感悟。开放性问题让人有思维的冲动,能激发学生兴趣,激活学生思维,是深层次的参与。有专家说:“课堂上,哪怕有一个开放性问题,这节课学生参与的层次就提高了”。只有有了思维的参与,才会蹦出思维的火花。
二、反馈要有激励性。
教师的反馈行为会在很大程度上鼓励或妨碍学生的参与。以往我们一直强调参与
面要广,参与人数要多,为了追求所谓的快节奏和训练学生快速思维能力,一个接一个的问题抛向学生,很少会在某个学生这边作些停顿,老师更多的是追求一种正确的答案,至于学生到底回答了什么,怎么会这样回答的,老师都没多关注。而且传统的反馈基本为“good”,“excellent”,“never mind”,”you will do it better next time.”等等,但这些无关痛痒的反馈已经激不起学生的兴趣,“不要使用这种程序化的、毫无意义的反应,你应该尽力澄清、综合处理、扩展、修改、提升和评价学生的回答。”(高慎英、刘良华)
学生回答错误时或有困难时,老师干脆而生硬的一句”no”或“sit down”会挫伤学生的积极性,但若老师能“容忍”一下,给予知识上或情感上的鼓励,或允许他向其他同学寻求帮助,这会给他莫大的安慰。只要他回答了,他就多了一次成功的机会。
必要时,教师需要“追问”、“补充”和“赏识”学生的回答,这会让学生感到教师一直在倾听,教师不仅在关心问题的答案,也同样关注着学生。如当学生有精彩回答时,我一定会再大声强调一下,说,“he/she says/thinks/is…”以表示赏识。又如一次,一个学生说:”i couldn’t climb the tree when i was young .” 我马上接口补充到“but i could climb the tree when i was young.”学生听后竟然大喊“哇!”这种真实、真诚而又平等的反馈显示出对学生的关注、对学生的欣赏,极大地激励了学生回答问题的积极性。在这种师生、生生的互动过程中,不断地传出学生美丽的声音。
[小结]:有时气氛热烈时,有太多的学生想发言,让说还是不让说?不让说吧,学生很扫兴;让说吧,花费时间太多,影响教学过程的完整性,所以有时有点矛盾。但我以为新课程下的课堂教学是开放自由的,不必只拘泥于教学过程是否完整,教学任务是否完成,只要时间花在学生上,只要课堂充满了活力,促进了学生的发展,教师尽可以放开手脚去尝试和探索。当然教师如果能够在高潮时结束学生的发言,并顺利过渡到其它环节是最好不过的。
各位评委老师,
大家好!
我今天说课的内容是9B Unit 4 Reading,我从教材、教法、学法指导和教学过程四个方面对本课进行说明。
一、说教材:
1、教材所处的地位及作用:
这单元是9B的最后一个单元。以Great people为话题展开学习,该话题很容易引起学生的讨论兴趣。在welcome to the unit 部分,学生已初步学习了一些有关伟人的知识。Reading 是一个单元的核心部分,它承载着众多的教学任务。我将reading部分分作二课时进行教学,第一课时为阅读课,第二课时为语言知识学习课和练习巩固课。根据教材的安排及新课标要求学生通过体验,实践,参与,合作,交流和探究等方式学习和使用英语,真正体现以学习者为中心的教学理念,我详细说说第一课时的教学。基于本课在教材中所处的地位及作用,特制定以下教学目标。
2、教学目标:
知识目标: 1、To grasp some important language points.
2、To understand English idoms.
能力目标: 1、To guess general meaning from keywords and context.
2、To skim text for overall meaning and scan for details.
情感目标:To learn spirit from great people.
3、教学重点与难点:
To identify true or false statements based on the reading passage.
To extract relevant information from the reading passage.
二、说教法:
本节课我主要采用以下几种教学方法:
1、根据课文特点和学生实际情况,以情景教学法进行教学。
通过形象生动的图片及相关资料,调动学生的学习兴趣, 激起学生情感上的共鸣,从而引导学生从整体上理解课文、从细节分析课文,促进学生的语言能力及其情感等方面整体发展。
2、采用小组学习法,扩大教学范围。
把学生分成四人小组,也可以自由组合,让他们在互动中启发思维。同时注意保证每个学生都有机会参与到学习中来,培养学生与伙伴合作的意识和策略。
3、运用操练法,拓宽学习渠道。
把大部分课堂时间留给学生,使学生在多信息、高密度、快节奏的灵活操练过程中拓宽学习渠道。
三、学法指导:
这一节是阅读课,九年级的学生已具有一定的英语阅读能力,听说能力在原有的基础上也得到了进一步的提高,但参与课堂的积极性有所下降。针对以上学情,所以我先指导学生进行快速阅读和深层阅读,帮助学生运用自主学习法来把握课文整体,培养学生的分析归纳独立思考的能力;鼓励学生小组活动,让每个人,尤其是那些薄弱同学,都能参与到课堂的学习中,能动手完成一些基础的学习任务和学习目标,重在激发学生学习英语的兴趣,通过讨论让他们主动去涉取知识。
四、教学过程:
一 Skim the text, answer questions:
1. Why is Neil Armstrong famous?
2. Are there any aliens on the moon?
3. What award did he get?
二 Para 1-3: Before he walked on the moon
Name
Neil Armstrong
Date of birth
on________________
Place of birth
in_________________
Experiences
at 6_____________________
at 15____________________________
at 16 _______________________________
in 1949 _____________________
when he moved to California ___________________
in 1962 ________________________
in 1966 ________________________
三 Para3:Read and complete the passage:
In 1962, he ____ _______ ____become an astronaut.
In 1966, he and David R. Scott _________ ___ join two spacecraft together for the first time in space. But when the spacecraft began spinning ____ _____ ________, Mission Control thought it was _____ ____ ____ _____ _____ ______, so they _______ Armstrong ____ cut the flight short, and he succeeded.
四 Para4-5: Walking on the moon
Read and answer some questions:
1. When did Armstrong land on the moon?
2. Who did he come to the moon with?
3. What are the famous words?
4. How long did they walk on the moon?
5. What did they collect for further research?
6. What did the whole world do when Apollo 11 returned?
五 Retell the two paragraphs with the help of the six questions above:
六 Para6-7:Reports about aliens on the moon
Read and judge T or F:
1. It is said that Armstrong and Aldrin saw alien spacecraft.
2. The alien spacecraft is very small.
3. When Armstrong was on the moon, the aliens were very friendly.
七 Para8:Award for Armstrong
1.What is the Medal of Freedom for a US citizen?
2. What did Armstrong do for people around the world?
八 Read the passage together and fill in the blanks with right words:
Neil Armstrong took his first f_______ at six and received his pilot’s ________(执照) at 16. In 1949, Neil j_______ the navy and worked as a p_______. He was s_________ to be an astronaut in 1962. Four years later, he m__________ to join two spacecraft together in space. On 20th July 1969, he _______(着陆) Apollo 11 on the moon with Aldrin __________(成功).Neil said ‘one small step for man, one giant leap for m________’. Armstrong got the highest a_____ that a US c________ can receive. He is the pride of the world.
九 Retell the text
Name: Neil Armstrong
Date of birth: 5th August 1930
Place of birth: Ohio, the USA
Major event: at 6: was interested in flying
at 16: got his student pilot’s licence
In 1949: joined the navy
In 1962: became an astronaut
In 1966: joined 2 spacecraft together for the first time in space.
On 20th July 1969: walked on the moon
Famous words: one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.
Award: Medal of Freedom
What do you think of him: our pride — make us realize...
Homework: 1.Recite the text.
2.Finish some additional exercises.
以上是第一范文网小编为大家整理的初中英语说课稿:9B Unit 4 Reading,希望对大家有所帮助。
Summer, Xiao Ming lazily lying in bed, would not, my mother was furious with anger, cried: When, and also 。.。.。. finally, Xiao Ming was not satisfied to go to school.
Xiaoyun Xiaoming at the same table is a good-hearted, often helps Xiao Ming. At this time, the teacher asked students to do, "class assignment of the" Lesson 15, written Xiaoming written, stopped, Oh, that is not of solving the problem Xiaoming ah! Xiaoming After much thought, not pen to paper. Finally, Xiao Ming looked Xiaoyun operating this, Xiaoyun saw and quickly with a gentle voice said to him: "Xiao Ming, do things on your own level, can not copy someone else ah!"
Xiaoming heard, shame: "Im sorry, I did not copy you later!"
Xiaoyun said: "Well, the afternoon after school, and Ill teach you Well 。.。.。."
However, I do not know God is not angry, heavy rain like a devil, has been to sleep. Boom, boom, boom, guess who was? Yes, Xiaoyun rain go home Xiaoming, Xiao Ming met said: "Xiaoyun, you are too good to me!"
My best friend is a good student because he is very hardworking. I learn a lot from him.
He helps me with math; I help him with English. We always help each other.
Besides that, hes honest and reliable.
I trust him completely and we share secrets all the time.